Yes, I read it. Pretty good stuff. Only thing is you can't B3 from the bola because he can use trait to block it (if he activates it early enough). Also, her only 1 hit launchers are overheads or mids, so he can just block high while in trait and his options are covered.
I did want to bring up something. If you MB the bola immediately after he activates trait, it still connects and leads to a b3 full combo. If you don't see him activate trait immediately after being put in the bola, it's almost guaranteed to hit. If you do see him activate trait, you can activate electric knuckles and go for some chip damage into more pressure. Or do something like f212 wing evade to stay safe and try to react to what he does next.